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REMEMBER:
- Past tense verbs ...
- Introduction ... Introduce a struggle and preview these struggles or challenges.
Barack Obama went through many struggles early in his life. Some of these struggles had to do with his family and living in many different places. But, even with all of these struggles, Barack Obama still found great success in life.
- Conclusion ... Barack Obama is nothing like me or Sadako.
"Barack Obama has an amazing life story. He faced many struggles and persevered. When comparing him to Sadako or myself, there are not many similarities. Sadako faced health challenges and ended up dying. Barack Obama's struggles came not from health, but from ..."
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- Be specific about only ... struggles, challenges, and success.
- Provide 3 links at the bottom of your writing - works cited.
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Start reading the chapters on Kim, Ana and Wendell in Seedfolks.
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